Also, now that I've read to chapter to the end ^_^ the smut was extremely hot!
As well as the ambivalent feelings the activities and his behaviour Severus had afterwards. Well, "hot" might be the wrong word for the latter, but definitely well-written and it seemed very realistic given his character and situation. And Harry's youthful enthusiasm and elation, followed by a rather diffuse worry - while still carefully not thinking about the situation and the impossibility of it ending well. Very Harry ^_^
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Date: 2008-04-02 06:27 pm (UTC)As well as the ambivalent feelings the activities and his behaviour Severus had afterwards. Well, "hot" might be the wrong word for the latter, but definitely well-written and it seemed very realistic given his character and situation.
And Harry's youthful enthusiasm and elation, followed by a rather diffuse worry - while still carefully not thinking about the situation and the impossibility of it ending well. Very Harry ^_^