So glad I did not have to kill you! Perfect ending! I love happy endings (real life is all I need of the other sort). I love dominant Snape. Your Snape is so real, so right, so is your Harry, and thank goodness for a genuine nice-bloke Ron. Recently I seem to have read fic after fic where he is suddenly the baddie and betrays Harry etc; to me that nearly always seems forced and unlikely and too often seems to serve merely as a rather weak plot device. Your Hermoine too is just how I imagined her when reading canon. There are many qualities which work together to make your stories so outstanding but above all,for me, it is your ear for dialogue which is the critical element in making them so real, so believable however fantastic the universe happens to be. Super-erotic D/s dynamic towards the end there! Whew! (Well, that is, apart from the mention of rimming which is definitely not my thing, but to each his own.) This will be a fic I return to from time to time; definitely a big favourite.
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Date: 2008-08-14 12:18 pm (UTC)I love dominant Snape. Your Snape is so real, so right, so is your Harry, and thank goodness for a genuine nice-bloke Ron. Recently I seem to have read fic after fic where he is suddenly the baddie and betrays Harry etc; to me that nearly always seems forced and unlikely and too often seems to serve merely as a rather weak plot device.
Your Hermoine too is just how I imagined her when reading canon.
There are many qualities which work together to make your stories so outstanding but above all,for me, it is your ear for dialogue which is the critical element in making them so real, so believable however fantastic the universe happens to be.
Super-erotic D/s dynamic towards the end there! Whew! (Well, that is, apart from the mention of rimming which is definitely not my thing, but to each his own.)
This will be a fic I return to from time to time; definitely a big favourite.