This was really beautiful, and with a very original characterization. I loved it!
""Is that why he hates you? Because you didn't stop it happening?" And maybe Greg's feeling a bit of that, too. "Or is it because of the way you've been over-compensating ever since?"" Wow, this makes so much sense that I think you almost convinced me it's canon.
I hope you'll write more, I absolutely adore your take on these characters! And you wrote a very convincing sex scene, that was really nice too (and hot!). ♥
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Date: 2010-10-20 07:38 am (UTC)""Is that why he hates you? Because you didn't stop it happening?" And maybe Greg's feeling a bit of that, too. "Or is it because of the way you've been over-compensating ever since?""
Wow, this makes so much sense that I think you almost convinced me it's canon.
I hope you'll write more, I absolutely adore your take on these characters! And you wrote a very convincing sex scene, that was really nice too (and hot!). ♥